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Is this a good IELTS Writing Task 2 introduction?
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I wrote: "In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion about technology in education."
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In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion about technology in education.
Some argue technology improves learning outcomes, while others worry it distracts students. This essay argues that balanced use of digital tools benefits education.
IELTS introductions should paraphrase the prompt and present a thesis — not announce what the essay "will discuss".
Avoid meta phrases like "In this essay I will discuss." Paraphrase the question and state your position directly: "Some argue technology improves learning outcomes, while others worry it distracts students. This essay argues that balanced use of digital tools benefits education."